Lyn and Yueyun's comments from my 8 minute presentation:
  • Thoughtful and developed presentation. I really enjoyed that
  • I got the joke
  • Kmart is a good story. Give it a time and date. At the moment it is a bit abstract
  • Objectives were good
  • Tell us where your ideas came from e.g. Slow Design principles
  • Tell everyone that the diagram is yours "ta da!"
    • Atm it is ambiguous what is yours and what is other people's
  • Building into a really good story
  • Make sure your process is in there
    • Make it obvious how you have developed your ideas
    • Have it raw
  • Nice drawings, shows sensitivity
  • We are seeing good visualisation skills
  • Work with traditional/noble materials
    • Warmth, texture, dense
    • Wood, brass, steel, cork, fabrics, ceramic
  • Get it right down to the details
  • Where do they fit in the home?
    • Nest together?